mi jo ala e tenpo sike mute.
mi pilin sama ni: mi jo e tenpo sike mute.
mi pilin ike lon poka mi.
mi ken ala tawa pona e noka mi.
mi tawa tomo pali pi jan pi pona sijelo.
jan pi pona sijelo li toki e ni: poka mi li pakala.
jan pi pona sijelo li wile e ni: jan li pana e poka sin tawa mi.
poka sin li ilo.
jan pi pona sijelo li wile pana e ilo ni lon insa sijelo mi.
ni li ike tawa mi.
mi wile awen e poka mi.
Man, I wish you were a snake and this would have a completely different reading (getting a new container). Get well soon.
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jan pi sona sijelo sounds like an anatomist.
jan pi pona sijelo sounds like a doctor
I would say "...li wile awen e ilo ni insa..." in any case it needs an e.
D'oh I read poki instead of poka. Now it doesn't sound so bad.
Deletemi jo ala e tenpo sike mute.
ReplyDeletemi pilin sama ni: mi jo E tenpo sike mute.
poka mi li pilin e ike tawa mi.
*My hip feels bad to me? Wrong "feel" (though we do tend to mix them up) You say "My hipe senses a bad to/for me" You want something like 'mi pilin ike lon poka mi' or 'mi pilin e ni: poka mi li ike'
mi ken ala tawa E noka mi pona. ('pona' probably goes next to 'tawa')
mi tawa tomo pali pi jan pi sona sijelo. (what Matthew says)
jan pi sona sijelo li toki e ni: poka mi li pakala.
jan pi sona sijelo li wile e ni: jan li pana e poka sin tawa mi.
poka sin li ilo.
jan pi sona sijelo li wile pana E ilo ni TAWA/LONinsa sijelo mi.
ni li ike tawa mi.
mi wile awen e poka mi.
tenpo sike kama la mi jo e poka sin.
Thank you both for your comments and corrections.
ReplyDeleteMi pilin Ike tan ni: sina pilin ike tan poka sina. o kama pona!
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